This is the feedback we received from our tutor.
Tutor Audio Feedback
The main points we took away from this were that our storyline was underdeveloped and the character had no motive or driving force that drove the narrative. We also needed to introduce the character of the pig in a bigger way so that the character had reason to exist. The music did not blend and we need to create a real soundtrack, and the film needs to have a consistent art style.
We were aware of a majority of these points as due to other priorities and lack of time, we did not create the animatic together; we created it individually in four sections with our own art styles and soundtracks that we were aware would not work when spliced together. However, we know that in the creation of the final piece, all of this will be resolved.
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